For those who don't know me, I am a Network Administrator, managing the School Network. When I have spare time( if any ), I like to write a few short pieces.

Feel free to post your short literature pieces here.

I will start off by posting two short pieces, entitled ' Colon Hydrotherapy' and 'The Thing That Ate My Back' .

Any comments, good or bad, feel free to evaluate

Enjoy

Eight99:D

Originally posted by eight99
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Tye story was quote gripping.
I loved the twists and turns in the plot.
I have to say, though.
The ending was a bit anti-climactic.
Left me with a feeling of not being resolved.

I love your character development style and technique of using anticipation and anxiety almost as another character in itself.
Brilliant!!

I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Here are the two short pieces to start off. They are :

'The Thing That Ate My Back'
'Colon Hydrotherapy'

Any comments, good or bad, feel free to evaluate.

Enjoy

Eight99:D

Colon Hydrotherapy

Eight99:D

Originally posted by one_raven
Tye story was quote gripping.
I loved the twists and turns in the plot.
I have to say, though.
The ending was a bit anti-climactic.
Left me with a feeling of not being resolved.

I love your character development style and technique of using anticipation and anxiety almost as another character in itself.
Brilliant!!

I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
Thanks.

Well now that you edited your first post to say more than just "s" my post isn't funny anymore.

That is, if anyone would have thought it was funny to begin with,

For those who have enjoyed my stories and gave positive comments, I thank you.

For those people who think my stories are a load of bull, then I thank you all the same.

Feel free to give YOUR true comment ; whether it is good or bad. I do not mind at all

See Ya

Eight99;)

P.S. : Spread the word, that I'm in the Art and Culture Section. The thread is entitled 'The Short Story Forum'

Thanks

eight 99,

You are a brilliant writer, this is one of the best thread I have ever read. Your character are so easy to relate with, keep up the good work.

Just check out my website, there's tons of stuff there. My most recent work--"Numina."