A Poem Thread

Discussion in 'Art & Culture' started by Angelus, Nov 9, 2002.

  1. wegs Matter and Pixie Dust Valued Senior Member

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    thank you for that, immortal.

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    one my fave poets...ee cummings...


    since feeling is first
    since feeling is first
    who pays any attention
    to the syntax of things
    will never wholly kiss you;

    wholly to be a fool
    while Spring is in the world

    my blood approves,
    and kisses are better fate
    than wisdom
    lady i swear by all flowers. Don't cry
    —the best gesture of my brain is less than
    your eyelids' flutter which says

    we are for each other: then
    laugh, leaning back in my arms
    for life's not a paragraph

    And death i think is no parenthesis
     
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  3. Immortal Banned Banned

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    I think you may be too old for me

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    Or perhaps just a little too bold
    I lapse the memory
    Can we put these gestures on hold?

    I hope not for you.
     
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  5. Robittybob1 Banned Banned

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    Immortal didn't last that long!
    Immortal banned forever
    When will the ban end?
    Never!
     
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    A Puppy's Tale


    The first thing she remembered upon opening her eyes
    Dreams of emerald green fields and sapphire blue skies
    Of running through the long grass with brothers and sisters by her side
    She wished they were still with her, not gone off to hide
    But she had a new home now and other friends to make
    The little puppy never cried, just wagged her tail and smiled
    For her new owners really loved her,
    In their new home by the lake.

    As time passed by the puppy grew and had a family of her own,
    Oh how she loved her puppies as she watched them play and roam
    But then a strange fear set in as the puppies started to grow
    For it seemed she must already somehow know
    Then the puppies all left for new homes of their own
    Though she herself was once a little puppy now all big and grown
    She felt the pain of tears as she was now left all alone.
     
  8. wegs Matter and Pixie Dust Valued Senior Member

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    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    Don't mock the banned
    Or next...could be you

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    Violets are not blue. Not sure why the original poet ever started that.
    :/
     
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    The poet may have wanted to express sky by the use of the word blue

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    <*>
     
  10. Magical Realist Valued Senior Member

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    A Noiseless Patient Spider

    By Walt Whitman

    "A noiseless, patient spider,
    I mark’d, where, on a little promontory, it stood, isolated;
    Mark’d how, to explore the vacant, vast surrounding,
    It launch’d forth filament, filament, filament, out of itself;
    Ever unreeling them—ever tirelessly speeding them.

    And you, O my Soul, where you stand,
    Surrounded, surrounded, in measureless oceans of space,
    Ceaselessly musing, venturing, throwing,—seeking the spheres, to connect them;
    Till the bridge you will need, be form’d—till the ductile anchor hold;
    Till the gossamer thread you fling, catch somewhere, O my Soul."

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    As I walk through the Valley of Death
    I tread careful.
    Never to crush roses red or violets blue.
    For I fear evil.
     
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  12. wegs Matter and Pixie Dust Valued Senior Member

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    You write good stuff.

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  13. Robittybob1 Banned Banned

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    It's your fault!
     
  14. Trooper Secular Sanity Valued Senior Member

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    Oh God! Why don't you hook her up with a link to your infamous Mercury thread.

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  15. wegs Matter and Pixie Dust Valued Senior Member

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    you two are cute ^^

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    Imagine, by John Lennon...

    Imagine there's no heaven
    It's easy if you try
    No hell below us
    Above us only sky
    Imagine all the people living for today

    Imagine there's no countries
    It isn't hard to do
    Nothing to kill or die for
    And no religion too
    Imagine all the people living life in peace

    You, you may say
    I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one
    I hope some day you'll join us
    And the world will be as one

    Imagine no possessions
    I wonder if you can
    No need for greed or hunger
    A brotherhood of man
    Imagine all the people sharing all the world

    You, you may say
    I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one
    I hope some day you'll join us
    And the world will live as one
     
  16. Trooper Secular Sanity Valued Senior Member

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    John Lennon rejected religion, you know. "Imagine", has been described as an atheist anthem.

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    Beauty


    The planet. He's a little...er, um, um...kooky.

    Apparent Retrograde Motion

    Have a good one!
     
  17. Robittybob1 Banned Banned

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    Mercury is a heavy metal. In good olde time I might. I'm not sure about it just yet.
    But where is the poetry in that?
     
  18. wegs Matter and Pixie Dust Valued Senior Member

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    lol i know.

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    but, sometimes, i wonder too. if there weren't all these divisions.
    it isn't what God had in mind.
    hugs to you trooper, hope you are well.

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    kook·y
    /ˈko͞okē/
    Adjective
    Strange or eccentric.

    Did you know: Life First Started On Planet Mercury?
     
  20. wegs Matter and Pixie Dust Valued Senior Member

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    lol how so?
     
  21. Trooper Secular Sanity Valued Senior Member

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    Oh, sorry. I thought it was fictional prose poetry.

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    Not really. It was just a way to prepare her for your creepiness kookiness.

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    Did you know that Edgar Allan Poe combined space and time into a single continuum in his poem Eureka?


    To the few who love me and whom I love -- to those who feel rather than to those who think -- to the dreamers and those who put faith in dreams as in the only realities -- I offer this Book of Truths, not in its character of Truth-Teller, but for the Beauty that abounds in its Truth; constituting it true. To these I present the composition as an Art-Product alone:- let us say as a Romance; or, if I be not urging too lofty a claim, as a Poem.

    What I here propound is true:- * therefore it cannot die:- or if by any means it be now trodden down so that it die, it will "rise again to the Life Everlasting."
    Nevertheless it is as a Poem only that I wish this work to be judged after I am dead.


    “A rational cause for the phaenomenon, I maintain that Astronomy has palpably failed to assign: -- but the considerations through which, in this Essay, we have proceeded step by step, enable us clearly and immediately to perceive that Space and Duration are one.”
     
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    I liked to read the Edgar Allen Poe writing Sir Trooper

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    here is a latest of mine.
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    *Shedding Wine Like Wildflowers*

    Ladened my vice
    with sticks of words
    on a hand drum.

    quiet I was seen
    by my love.

    O' new land.
    lead me to the love song.

    my match burnt.
    it's all shaved ice.

    and you.
    sweet syrups...

    quiet I was seen..
    by my love.

    a banner in the sky
    with words
    I Love Like Sugar & Spice.

    O' new Land.

    *************************
     
  23. Trooper Secular Sanity Valued Senior Member

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    Well done, Anew!
    I'm not sure why but it reminded me of "DACÃ".

    If

    If you could ever
    Measure the immeasurable,
    Take in the boundlessness
    And, walking across nothingness,
    Be neither one nor the other;

    If you could ever
    Be love without loving,
    Be hope without hoping,
    Be speech without speaking,
    Be thought without thinking;

    If you could ever
    Hear the unheard,
    Look into the unseen
    And learn the unknown-
    Would there be a new beginning?


    -Elena Liliana Popescu
     

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