A Poem Thread

Discussion in 'Art & Culture' started by Angelus, Nov 9, 2002.

  1. Anew Life isn't a question. Banned

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    Gosh what a perfect !writing by

    Elena Liliana Popescu

    Ha! an essential love song

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  3. Anew Life isn't a question. Banned

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    <*>Five and Nine <*>

    She did.
    She did not think she was an ocean sponge,
    She like he

    would primp and tailor, and value.

    Gosh how the two liked to break paisleys in the air,
    taking to snare drum
    in the house
    n' outside,
    not to bother the trees, he and she would drum frett out

    out that the unknown "care like plus..

    "one four" good buddy they'd say, and clip time with their snare drums..

    ******

    then they'd blush

    blush

    after they valued plus.

    *what for evening must arise he and she smiled..

    and played warm flute

    *not to bother the trees.

    He and she were not sponges
    or pocket watches in the human ocean,

    Only of

    It is that as..

    without a hitch, dressed in 'affine

    Vast affinity

    breaking paisley

    for 'life to have it's will.
     
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  5. Trooper Secular Sanity Valued Senior Member

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    Oh, you who read some song that I have sung_,
    What know you of the soul from whence it sprung_?

    Dost dream the poet ever speaks aloud_
    His secret thought unto the listening crowd_?

    Go take the murmuring sea-shell from the shore_:
    You have its shape, its color and no more_.

    It tells not one of those vast mysteries_
    That lie beneath the surface of the seas_.

    Our songs are shells, cast out by-waves of thought_;
    Here, take them at your pleasure; but think not_

    You've seen beneath the surface of the waves_,
    Where lie our shipwrecks and our coral caves_.

    ~ Ella Wheeler Wilcox
     
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  7. PartyBoy Registered Member

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    I set out on a mid summer night
    The gold that strolled was worth the fight
    I hold her hands as she bends her wing
    simple as a string and a ring
    ample time to hold the pain
    suffering released by the rain
    ceased to be a burden of dreams
    fluttering over the streams which drain
    I've held her hand and seen her cry
    my heart still has never heard a lie
    This mid summer moon will be crescent soon
    This mid summer night felt an angels womb
     
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  8. Robittybob1 Banned Banned

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    Its your fault that I write the good stuff. How so? I don't know.

    My prayer was answered,
    Was this fate or divine,
    No Man knows, only Time.
    Time will tell if this is true,
    With no one to fault,
    When the good stuff comes,
    I blame you.
     
  9. wegs Matter and Pixie Dust Valued Senior Member

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    *blush*

    I like.
     
  10. Anew Life isn't a question. Banned

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    PartyBoy,


    I guess your pretty writing didn't need a title. I haven't the skill to * highlight your writing here (I just don't know how to highlight afore writings). I think the writing is a pretty lovesong. I may write it down with credit to PartyBoy 2013.

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  11. PartyBoy Registered Member

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    I've already had that thought

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    I'm just not quite sure how to sing it yet or the beat or which voice to use. Lol but thanks for the confirmation of my suspicions.
     
  12. Robittybob1 Banned Banned

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    I don't even know what arrogance is.
    It's just something that comes naturally to me.

    But if you say so, it must be so.

    http://sentence.yourdictionary.com/arrogant

    Which of the sentence examples below describes my arrogance best?

    I think this is it: "You disgust me too, because you are unbelievably arrogant." Agh! How silly do you want me to be?
     
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  13. Anew Life isn't a question. Banned

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    a playful poem song


    *Snare Drum Clip

    To market To market
    *
    beta sympathetics
    *
    **oxytonic***************

    ..maybe it's ok
    n' one sight of Kali was enough not to

    ****
    hey 'ole Shiva bolo
    ..as if we've reached a finish line ?now
    ****
    pala pala pala

    **
    h,mm h,h,mm 'hmm

    ********************

    To market To market
    ********
    ehya, 'tis no slot machine

    ?how will this Write.

    ****************
     
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  15. wegs Matter and Pixie Dust Valued Senior Member

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    Glad you figured it all out there, bob.
    :-}}

    That's pretty neat, Anew.

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    *Terrestrial History*

    O' the sharted glory of war needs a successor,
    Centuries of increasing human population

    And the birth of international internet

    my my O' my
    'language differentiality

    and processions for political peace midst the principle of Armistice

    in the trust of Unity changing

    I think of Montessori

    I think of hiking a trodden path,
    A terrestrial denizen
    in the will of good will

    O' the sheddings
    the journeys

    for an equanamous

    providorship

    in the great successor the arts of making Peace.

    :bugeye:

    *********<*>**********

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  18. Quantum Quack Life's a tease... Valued Senior Member

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    "O' the sharted glory of war needs a successor"

    mmmm.. this is good shart!

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    thanks for the 'hallo Quantum Quack* for I have been inspired here. I like to amble in many of the threads, and I say I have liked your writing as well.
     
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    hmm but not as uhm "neat" as this line:

    "O' the sharted glory of war needs a successor"

    which I found to be rather...uhm... neat!

    Sometimes a little diamond just comes to the surface,

    -Perhaps it is the "mood of the muse" that's to blame,
    This single line caught my eye and to pass
    -with out acknowledgement would be a ...shame.

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    Vance is the 40 year old intellectually handicapped man that helps me in the weekends. We have cake and yoghurt as a treat.
     
  22. Robittybob1 Banned Banned

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    Hugs my song today .... but now all hopes are now dashed .... Oh babe, I hate to go.

    Every place I go, I think of you
    Every song I sing, I sing for you ....

    All my bags are packed
    Im ready to go
    Im standin here outside your door
    I hate to wake you up to say goodbye
    But the dawn is breakin
    Its early morn
    The taxis waitin
    Hes blowin his horn
    Already Im so lonesome
    I could die

    So kiss me and smile for me
    Tell me that youll wait for me
    Hold me like youll never let me go
    Cause Im leavin on a jet plane
    Dont know when Ill be back again
    Oh babe, I hate to go

    Theres so many times Ive let you down
    So many times Ive played around
    but I tell you now, they
    dont mean a thing
    Every place I go, I think of you
    Every song I sing, I sing for you
    When I come back, Ill wear
    your wedding ring

    So kiss me and smile for me
    Tell me that youll wait for me
    [ Find more Lyrics at www.mp3lyrics.org/bcy ]
    Hold me like youll never let me go
    Cause Im leavin on a jet plane
    Dont know when Ill be back again
    Oh babe, I hate to go

    Now the time has come to leave you
    One more time
    Let me kiss you
    And close your eyes and
    Ill be on my way
    Dream about the days to come
    When I wont have to leave alone
    About the times, That I
    wont have to say

    Oh, kiss me and smile for me
    Tell me that youll wait for me
    Hold me like youll never let me go
    Cause Im leavin on a jet plane
    Dont know when Ill be back again
    Oh babe, I hate to go

    But, Im leavin on a jet plane
    Dont know when Ill be back again
    Oh babe, I hate to go

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vesGUA8-Y_k
    john denver - leaving on a jet plane (lyrics)
     
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