Any comments, if you can actually sit to read, because i understand it's long.

Discussion in 'Free Thoughts' started by moses207, Dec 1, 2006.

  1. spidergoat Liddle' Dick Tater Valued Senior Member

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    It's a good effort. I would like to hear more about the character and how he interacts with the world, not so much his entire personal philosophy, categorized into sections, and only the teacher's limited reaction.
     
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  3. moses207 Registered Member

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    yeah i agree, thanks for the comment though, im very unorganized, but thats what i like, but i hope to be doing how the character interacts soon. I def need to get better, because i somewhat suck. thanks.
     
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  5. Raithere plagued by infinities Valued Senior Member

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    Comments? Well, it's rather incoherent but that's okay as long as you're going for a stream of consciousness effect. Your ideas aren't insane, the concepts are part and parcel of religion and philosophy (reality as god's dream, infinite regression of creation, the problem of evil, the evolution of god, etc).

    My suggestions; stick around and visit the religion and philosophy forums, you'll see many of these ideas being bounced around. Participating will help you to hone your ideas and your writing. Read more about the philosophy of religion and metaphysics. You'll find that as you learn more you'll be able to express these ideas more clearly and you'll find out where others have gone before.

    ~Raithere
     
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  8. amark317 game developer-in-training Registered Senior Member

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    holy fucking shit!!!!!!!!!!

    I knew that I wouldn't read it when I saw it was more than 2 paragraphs long!
     
  9. ejderha Exhausted Registered Senior Member

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    I enjoyed it. Thanks. I wonder, how it would be like, if it evolved into a mind sci-fi?
     
  10. tuberculatious Banned Banned

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    I didn't mind the longevity, i just didn't like the randomness.
     
  11. cluelusshusbund + Public Dilemma + Valued Senior Member

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    When i read that it gave me a simular feelin as when i was readin Marry Shellys "Frankinstine" (1 of my favort books).!!!

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    Welcom to the groop.!!!
     
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  12. James R Just this guy, you know? Staff Member

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    This thread is three years old.
     
  13. cluelusshusbund + Public Dilemma + Valued Senior Member

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    Well... beter late than never to welcom sombody to the groop... thats what i always say... eh

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  14. tuberculatious Banned Banned

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    oh...3 years old. then i have wasted my time. and yours.
     

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