Haiku!

Discussion in 'Eastern Philosophy' started by Mystech, May 2, 2003.

  1. Mystech Adult Supervision Required Registered Senior Member

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    A thread for posting Haiku. They're short and fun. Here are two I wrote a few nights ago while I was bored:

    Dumbness
    People are stupid
    It makes me very depressed
    Can I get a hug?


    AR-15
    Big black and phallic
    You make me squeal like a girl
    How I lust for you
     
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  3. EvilPoet I am what I am Registered Senior Member

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    Haiku and Zen Poetry

    The distant mountains
    are reflected in the eye
    of the dragonfly
    -Issa

    Clinging to the bell
    he dozes so peacefully,
    this new butterfly
    -Buson

    Clambering up the Cold Mountain path,
    The Cold Mountain trail goes on and on:
    The long gorge choked with scree and boulders,
    The wide creek, the mist-blurred grass.
    The moss is slippery, though there's been no rain
    The pine sings, but there's no wind.
    Who can leap the world's ties
    And sit with me among the white clouds?
    -Hanshan

    Every single thing
    Changes and is changing
    Always in this world.
    Yet with the same light
    The moon goes on shining.
    -Saigyo
     
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    mathematics has infinity
    religion has eternity
    I gaze out over the ocean
    and I have my thoughts

    -armand trawick
     
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  7. stray dog Registered Senior Member

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    I see the light from a star
    that has died long ago
    and I think of how the light
    goes on forever

    -a. trawick
     
  8. Mystech Adult Supervision Required Registered Senior Member

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    Ahh, thanks for contributing.

    A reminder to all of our contestants, Haiku should follow the form of the first line consisting of five sylables, the second having seven, and the third should have five (5-7-5). Also points are docked if your Haiku is a sentence broken up into the 5-7-5 format, each line should be independent.
     
  9. valentino Registered Senior Member

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    my stomach grumbles
    i'm searching the ice box now
    hey! is that cheddar?
     
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    Temptation

    Incarnadine lips
    Look so tempting and divine
    I'll punch you once more
     
  11. Mystech Adult Supervision Required Registered Senior Member

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    Save the ozone eat a cow

    Milk the cow until dry
    Make hamburger and wallets
    Praise the bovine god
     
  12. Adriatic Registered Member

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    It's fair!

    I offered her all
    And she answered with her lies
    It was fair exchange

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  13. Circe Registered Senior Member

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    Know your master

    Feed me right away!
    Faking deafness is painful
    Cat's claws in my calves
     
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  14. firingseeds Registered Senior Member

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    haiku

    ...5?
    .....7?
    ...5?
     
  15. airavata portentous Registered Senior Member

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    the wall divides us,
    the two sides make bitter love,
    but the high hopes shatter.
     
  16. airavata portentous Registered Senior Member

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    the ocean calls me,
    the sea gulls sing for me,
    I, the wind flow fast.
     
  17. EvilPoet I am what I am Registered Senior Member

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    In this mountain village,
    shining in my soup bowl,
    the bright moon arrives
    -Issa
     
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  18. Mystech Adult Supervision Required Registered Senior Member

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    A reminder to everyone who still hasn't gotten it:

    Haiku is a three line poem consisting of three lines, the first line must be 5 sylables, the second must be 7 sylables, and the third must also be 5 sylables in length.
     
  19. one_raven God is a Chinese Whisper Valued Senior Member

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    one two three four five
    one two three four five plus two
    one two three four five

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    Quite inspired, I know.

    Life is quite simple
    Difficulty is a choice
    What will your choice be?
     
  20. one_raven God is a Chinese Whisper Valued Senior Member

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    What IS a Haiku?

    I know the whole 5-7-5 thing, but I mean deeper than that?
    Is there a significance to teh 5-7-5?
    Were Haiku's intended to have a purpose?

    Does anyone know the history of Haiku?

    Did God create man?
    Or is man God's creator?
    Don't fuckin' ask me.
     
  21. Mystech Adult Supervision Required Registered Senior Member

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    They're an ancient form of chinese poetry, and most often deal with broad topics of life and nature and the like. More than that I can't say.
     
  22. Blunther Registered Senior Member

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    That's brilliant mate!
    I wish I could write Haiku
    I'm crap at writing.
     
  23. airavata portentous Registered Senior Member

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    burn passion to dust,
    heal the human weaknesses,
    non-emotion wins.
     

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